Neo Sabakukage
Character Age : 28 Posts : 308 Ryo : 20000
| Subject: Denryoku no hyōtan Thu Nov 22, 2012 1:07 am | |
| Denryoku no hyōtan (Gourd of Power) Type of Equipment: Gourd Description: After multiple times summoning the golden dust from his mouth, Neo began thinking of a way to access the dust faster and thus came of with the gourd. The Gourd is filled to the brim with the golden chrome dust from Neo's clan and can be manipulated like usual. The gourd is 26 inches in diameter and 4 ft tall sitting upright. Can hold up to 10 gallons (1% decrease in speed per gallon) of dust at a time. Ability (or Abilities):N/A Durability: Chrome in strength History of Item: As a kid Neo constantly had to summon his KKG dust from his mouth, he didn't mind at all back then but now that seemed to consume to much time and effort. While studying in his office he came up with the idea to create a sort of holding chamber for the dust instead of having to summon it from his mouth all the time, this way he could access it more easier. After a few days of thinking on the design he would have a craftsman use his metallic dust to forge the gourd for him. Neo has had the gourd sense he was about 18 and now it just feels comfortable on his back when he has it on, like it's supposed to be there, at this point even the weight of it feels light which is good. Appearance: - Spoiler:
~ Mine is all Black
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Haru Taiyoukage
Character Age : 29 Posts : 414 Ryo : 15600
| Subject: Re: Denryoku no hyōtan Thu Nov 22, 2012 1:14 am | |
| Come on man. This is garbage. You know better than this Nami. History should be longer. Re-word the durability. Chrome in strength is not a proper description. Also there need to be dimensions of the Gourd so we know how much gold dust is actually carried. | |
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Neo Sabakukage
Character Age : 28 Posts : 308 Ryo : 20000
| Subject: Re: Denryoku no hyōtan Fri Nov 23, 2012 5:29 am | |
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Re-word the durability. Chrome in strength is not a proper description. Why would the durability would need to be re-worded since that is its strength which would mean anything stronger then chrome can basically destroy it (Hardness scale comes into play here). and I believe you have it backwards because the description isn't just "Chrome in strength". - Code:
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History has been modified and Dimensions added. | |
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Haru Taiyoukage
Character Age : 29 Posts : 414 Ryo : 15600
| Subject: Re: Denryoku no hyōtan Fri Nov 23, 2012 8:31 pm | |
| I'll let the durability thing go unless one of my colleagues has a problem with it. Now for the dimensions, 20 gallons is a little much. My blood gourd with Haru was only 10 gallons and it was always enough. | |
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Bryn T. Stormblood Yamakage
Character Age : 21 Posts : 506 Ryo : 10220
| Subject: Re: Denryoku no hyōtan Fri Nov 23, 2012 9:27 pm | |
| As a side note: This thing weighs a hefty sum, so for every 1 gallon, you lose 1% in speed. | |
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Neo Sabakukage
Character Age : 28 Posts : 308 Ryo : 20000
| Subject: Re: Denryoku no hyōtan Sat Nov 24, 2012 12:03 am | |
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I can agree to both of these, Edited to 10 gallons and 10% decrease in speed. - Code:
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Quick question though seeing how I will be carrying this almost everyone is it possible to have a training topic to where I can make the decrease in speed go down by half? | |
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Haru Taiyoukage
Character Age : 29 Posts : 414 Ryo : 15600
| Subject: Re: Denryoku no hyōtan Mon Nov 26, 2012 10:01 pm | |
| I'll approve it at 10k. As for the other question, that's up to the big boss. | |
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Haru Taiyoukage
Character Age : 29 Posts : 414 Ryo : 15600
| Subject: Re: Denryoku no hyōtan Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:07 am | |
| Sorry for the delay in answering the question, but it's a no on the training thing. | |
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