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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 3:54 pm | |
| Special Yo-Yo Type of Equipment: Mid-range to Close-range Description:The only way to use them close range, is to actually use the yoyos. There is 1 Yo-Yo, weighing 25kg, thus being heavy to hold at first, but with enough practice the person can hold it easily. The Yo-Yo's wire length can go upto 10ft. Neru usually has it tied underneath his arm and sometimes tied on his hands. He doesn't hold it all day though, he can send the Yo-Yos from his arm to his back pocket. The wire is 1 inch thicker than a normal string. The yoyo has a small ring at the beginning of the string, there is also another ring which activates the spikes. Ability (or Abilities):The Yo-Yo can be used with chakra to help hold/use them easily Neru can infuse the Yo-Yo's with lightning chakra. The lightning chakra creates a shock affect. Cooldown 5 posts, lasts for 2 posts. The shock causes very slight electrical burns, which can disarm if user hits directly at the target's hand. Requires 10 chakra Neru can infuse the wire with wind chakra to help increase speed or change direction without him moving his hands. The speed increases by 5 mph. Cooldown 8 posts. Takes one post to apply wind chakra to the wire, lasts for 2 posts. This ability can only be used twice in a battle, or the wire starts to recieve damage from the tension. Requires 10 chakra Due to years of training, Neru has mastered on how to use the Yo-Yos without hurting himself in the process. He can move the Yo-Yos in many directions very quickly, at the velocity of 25 mph There is an extra wire which activates spikes on the wire, the spikes only cover 2.5m of the string. 0.5 inches long (1.27cm), sharp enough to cut. The spikes are activated when the second ring is pulled. Durability: Yo-YoSteel The WireIs strong enough to not be broken by a sword. You could say it's equivalent to a steel sword in hardness. Anything harder than steel, and the wire will break. History of Item:When Neru was 16 he asked a blacksmith to make him 2 special types of Yo-Yos. The blacksmith first thought Neru was joking but realised he was serious. The blacksmith took up the offer and made the Yo-Yos as strong as steel with the wires strong enough and flexible enough to move the Yo-Yos. Neru made the design himself and painted the Yo-Yos with the symbol; Star of David. Appearance:- Spoiler:
Note: The string is longer than shown in the appearance, the pic is used to show how big the yoyo is
Last edited by Neru on Fri Apr 19, 2013 5:04 am; edited 9 times in total | |
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Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 4:05 pm | |
| Get rid of the poison unless you register a poison jutsu used on the yo-yo. Also, it's mid-ranged, not long-ranged. Fix those and bump | |
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Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 4:07 pm | |
| Also, how much can you increase the speed with wind chakra? | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 4:28 pm | |
| Ok edited the things you asked except for the poison. I can add poison if I register a jutsu for it? | |
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Takoda Chūnin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 517 Ryo : 4600
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 4:44 pm | |
| poison will indeed be something you could add by registering it, Im currently working on making this site's poison system right now actually. | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 4:55 pm | |
| - Takoda wrote:
- poison will indeed be something you could add by registering it, Im currently working on making this site's poison system right now actually.
So I'll be able to add poison to it right? | |
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Takoda Chūnin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 517 Ryo : 4600
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:14 pm | |
| Not sure how poison would work with a yo-yo, or any blunt weapon really. Planning on making the string razor wire or something? | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:23 pm | |
| - Takoda wrote:
- Not sure how poison would work with a yo-yo, or any blunt weapon really. Planning on making the string razor wire or something?
Yeah, it the wire has needles (which are activated by an extra string). Wanted to add poison on them | |
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Takoda Chūnin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 517 Ryo : 4600
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:34 pm | |
| Like I said in chat, you'll just need to wait until I finish the poison system but due to you lacking Ijutsu you'll only be able to use physical poison rather than jutsu | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:52 pm | |
| - Takoda wrote:
- Like I said in chat, you'll just need to wait until I finish the poison system but due to you lacking Ijutsu you'll only be able to use physical poison rather than jutsu
Alrighty, thanks for the info! I'll wait till it's done | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:14 pm | |
| Bump, nerfed the abilities and added a better description for the wire (I guess) | |
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Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Thu Apr 18, 2013 2:19 pm | |
| Explain the shock ability more. Does it cause numbness? Paralysis? Electrical burns?
Include that you need to spend D rank chakra to activate the wind, lightning, or spikes.
What can the spikes cut through? How deep do they cut? How long do they last and what's the cooldown on them? Make sure you include what material of blade it takes to cut the wire. | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Thu Apr 18, 2013 2:32 pm | |
| Edited, and the spikes are activated by the second ring, they are already inside the wire. Already have the durability of the wire added in Durability part | |
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Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Thu Apr 18, 2013 4:03 pm | |
| Make sure you include then that anything above steel can cut the wire or break the yo-yo. Do that and I can price it. | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Fri Apr 19, 2013 1:48 am | |
| Done, made it easier to see which is which. | |
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Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Fri Apr 19, 2013 3:36 pm | |
| Approved at 19,000 Ryo. Hiked price for the abilities and middle range. | |
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Neru Genin
Character Age : 22 Posts : 344 Ryo : 12000
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Sun Apr 28, 2013 8:05 pm | |
| Would like to purchase now, good sir! | |
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Takoda Chūnin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 517 Ryo : 4600
| Subject: Re: Yo-Yo Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:06 pm | |
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