Stormblood, Bryn T. - Jutsu Registrar

Academy (E Rank)

Name: Earth Style: Underground Voyage
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. The user of this jutsu has gained the ability to be able to move through the earth as if it were water, being able to dig with extreme ease with hands or feet. By focusing chakra into the hands or feet, just as one would focus chakra into feet to stand atop water, the caster focuses chakra into the hands, or the feet, and can cut and slice through earth as if it had the consistency of water. The user can completely travel through the ground as though he were walking on land. This does not apply to other people’s jutsu however due to that earth being fused with foreign chakra. The caster can navigate through 200 meters of earth before having to expel more chakra.

Genin (D Rank)

Name: Earth Style: Mimiwokatamukeru no Jutsu
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. After being activated, the user gains the ability to feel vibrations in the earth, whether it be the ground, walls, or other structures. Using this ability, they can feel all physical attributes of anyone in the affected radius. Simple things from height, weight, and gender to more accurate things like ear size, breathing problems, and eyebrow width can be felt. The radius goes on for one half of a mile. The problem is that the user has to be completely still for this jutsu to work. This can last for a time of 5 posting rounds, and has a cooldown of 5 rounds as well.


Name: Crystal Style: Sharded Knuckles
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Requires charging equal to handseals at this rank. After the proper amount of charging into the hands, the user coats their hands (up to the wrists) in a 4-inch thick layer of crystal. The hands must be made into clenched fists in order for this to work. The crystal gives the ability to dent steel and break bones, and has the natural durability of steel itself. This lasts for 5 posts, and has a cooldown of 3.

Chuunin (C Rank)

Name: Crystal Style: Encasement
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu (Requires any weapon)
Distance: Weapon must be in hand
Description: Requires charging equal to handseals at his rank. After the necessary amount of chakra is charged into the hand holding any weapon, the caster encases that weapon in a thin layer of crystal, adding boosted durability. The durability is increased by 1 point on the hardness scale (+1) to whichever weapon it was cast on. This can last for 6 posts, and has a 5 post cooldown.

Name: Mixed Martial Arts Style: The Crouching Tiger
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: -
Type: Taijutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. This martial artist stance is completely defensive as far as purpose goes, and is useful to those who fight in the way of passiveness. The fighter using this style curls one hand into a fist, turns it upside down, and rests it pointed forward and beside their hip. The other hand is lifted in front of the user’s torso, palm open but fingers curled to look like a tiger’s paw. In this stance, the user can grab any taijutsu attack or kenjutsu attack (granted he grabs the blunt end before the sharp end hits) with the hand lifted forward. Then, the fighter uses the already formed fist, and bats the attack away. If a taijutsu move is grabbed and stopped, then the following punch with the opposite hand can fracture bones. If a kenjutsu move is caught, then the weapon is disarmed from the target. This has a 4 post cooldown.

Special Jounin (B Rank)

Name: Crystal Style: Shield of Whimsy
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Requires charging equal to handseals at this rank. The user created a coating over the forearm and hand of their choosing, and from it extends from the bottom and top of the forearm by one foot, creating a 5 inch shield 2 feet, 4 inches long from top to bottom. This shield can block all earth and lightning jutsu below S rank, and all other jutsu below A. It can also withstand any taijutsu attack, and any weapon attack made from a weapon of titanium quality or lower. This shield lasts for 5 posts, and requires a 7 post cooldown.

Name: Mixed Martial Arts Style: The Jade Dragon
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: -
Type: Taijutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. This is one of the hidden Taijutsu styles passed down through the Orik family lineage. It is the offensive counterpart to the Crouching Tiger, focusing mostly on strategic ferocity in the attacks. The user takes a position in which the knees are bent and the feet are shoulderlength apart. He then raises both arms in front of him with open palms and stretched out fingers, resembling dragon's claws. The user waits again for their opponent to attack, but instead of waiting to counter it, they meet it head-on. The user can hit whatever the opponent is using to attack. If the opponent's kick, punch, or any other bodily attack is stopped, the area hit will receive bruising of the muscle and breaking of the bone. They will also be sent backwards into the air. As the opponent flies backward, the user grabs them by the foot before they get too far, pulls them back, and slams them into the ground. This not only creates an opening to a follow-up attack, but the contact with the ground knocks the wind out of the opponent. If a weapon-based attack is deflected, the user will hit any non-sharp part of the weapon, disarm it from the opponent, and it will also send the opponent flying backwards in the same manner. Cooldown of 6 rounds.

Jounin (A Rank)

Name: Kamehameha
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 200 feet
Description: Requires two posts of detailed charging. The first post of charging starts with the caster clasping his hands together in front of him, then pulling them apart while generating lightning chakra. In doing this, the caster creates a magnetic electric field around their body. In the next post, the caster bring his hands to the right side of his body, and begins generating crystal chakra in between both his open palms. Using the electric field, the caster overrides the crystal chakra with the lightning, and forms a dense energy source of a fusion mainly composed of lightning, but condensed by crystal. This part lasts for one post, and if it is held out a post longer, the energy consumes the caster, the crystal spreads to every cell of the body, turning the caster into a giant crystal. The crystal growth is sped up rapidly because of the electricity combined with it. On the third post, the caster thrust both open palms forward to release the energy. The energy releases in the form of a beam of crystal-condensed lightning. The beam has a radius of 12 feet. It flies forward at a rate of 80mph. If it hits anything, the crystal in the lightning cuts clean through any material with a durability of titanium or lower, and the lightning itself vaporizes it. This can be used once per topic.

S Rank

Name: Crystal Style: Impenetrable Dome
Rank of Jutsu: S
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 1600 meter radius
Description: Requires two posts of handseals. After performing the necessary handseals, the caster slams the final seal into the ground at his feet. The chakra then spreads out in a massive radius as stated above, covering a massive radius. After a third turn of the chakra spreading out to the edge, the caster lifts his hands up into the air, and at the same time, from the edge of the radius, a huge crystal wall being 10 feet thick and made of crystal that is impenetrable rises up from the ground. It connects in the air after rising 60 feet and forms a dome. This dome can withstand any jutsu, and any weapon, but it serves no offensive purpose. It can be shattered at the will of the user. If shattered by the caster, it explodes into a giant cloud of fine crystal dust and falls harmlessly to the ground. This can be used once per week.

Finished

Lets start with the E-rank. What is the charge time of the jutsu?

Also, as it's a passive, I believe you need to specify how many times a topic you may be able to use it. It's still a jutsu and therefore can't be used for an unlimited period time. (Since it is after all E-rank, I can understand if the charges and uses are extremely low.)

Fix/explain and bump.

Alright, for passive jutsu they require no charge time and no cooldown and can be used however many times they'd like as long as they expend the chakra. Something you will have to put though is how many feet you can dig before needing to expel another E-rank amount of chakra, do this and your E-rank is diggity-done.

In your first D-rank jutsu, does it require handseals? If so, specify that.

It's passive, my friend, so no it does not. Bumpity bumpity bump bumpers bumpers

"proper amount of charging" is a tad vague. ad something relating to "according to the users rank" or along those lines

Bump

Crystal Style: Encasement - "Distance: Weapon must be in hand" Doesn't tell exactly the distance of the ability. Is it within a foot, or long-ranged?

Also, "adding boosted durability"; What is the specific amount of the boost in percentage? And the "+1 to hardness scale"; Does that mean to the next level of hardness? Or just a small percentage increase?

Disregarding my last post, your jutsu look all good now, I think.

Approved! (Unless I forgot some things)

Thank you, sir

Free techs: Part 2

Genin (D Rank)

Name: Earth Release: Rock-Mat Technique
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 150 feet
Description: Hand seals; the user completes their hand seals and stomps the ground with their foot to creates two circular slabs of stone, each a foot and a half across and three inches thick. With a powerful kick or punch the user sends the slabs flying straight in the direction of their choosing at ten miles per hour, after about one hundred and fifty feet the slabs lose speed and fall back to the ground and crumble into dirt. Both slabs must be launched on their own and the maximum height they can be is anywhere from just above the ground to level with the user's chest and shoulders. Whenever these slabs hit something it is like getting hit with a stone disc, at these speeds a direct hit can fracture bones but due to the nature of the technique they then revert back into dirt, this means they can not fully break a bone with the exception of fingers. Four round cool down.

Chuunin (C Rank)

Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm)
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 10 meters
Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. While not necessarily causing death, this jutsu does cause extreme pain and can cause suffocation if not evaded or escaped within the time allotted. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:

Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade
Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade
Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade
Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade
Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade

If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some the movement of the enemy to be hampered by 10%. This effect is stackable, so if the opponent is caught in the technique twice, they will have 20% movement speed deducted. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth. (4 post cooldown)

Special Jounin (B Rank)

Name: Earth Style: Earth Dragon Jutsu (Doton: Dosekiryū)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 300 ft
Description: After the needed handseals the user will transfer chakra into the ground, turning the earth under into mud. The user will then form the mud into a huge dragon that can be sent for an attack. The dragon is 30 ft long and 5 ft wide, and moves at 50 ft/s, with enough force to dent steel and pierce through iron. The dragon can break bones. If used in an area with mud already the dragon's size increases to 60 ft it's width goes to 10 ft, and the jutsu's strength is increased by 10% able to punh through steel. A C rank Raiton technique can break apart the dragon. If used with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Projectile the dragon's size increases to 100 ft and 20 ft wide, and the jutsu is increased by 20%, it can punch through reinforced steel easily. A B rank Raiton technique or higher can dissipate it if used with earth dragon projectile. The user can only make it 100 ft once per topic. The dragon can change direction up to three times. 4 post cooldown.

Name: Batter Up!
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 100 feet
Description: Requires charging equal to handseals at this rank. After charging the proper amount of chakra into a palm of the caster's choosing, a small, smooth sphere of crystal forms in the hand. It is the size of a standard baseball (diameter of 3 inches). It has the same durability as diamond. At standard strength, the user can throw this ball at a speed of 90mph, after winding up to pitch it at the target. If it hits, because of its small size, it can precisely break any bone it hits. If the user has any strength boost, simply calculate whichever percentage boost into the original speed, and add it to the original (Example: 90mph with 20% strength boost = 90mph + 20% of 90 = 90 + 18 = 108mph). The damage is always the same though regardless of speed. Cooldown of 6 posts.

Jounin (A Rank)

Name: Big Bang
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 200 feet
Description: Requires two detailed posts of charging. In the first post, the caster pulls both open palms back and holds them out against each side of their hip, gathering the energy and strength needed to launch the attack. In the second post, the caster thrusts both open palms out and hold them next to eachother facing the target. In doing so, a huge ball with a diameter of 9 feet forms immediately in front of the hands. The ball is made of extremely concentrated lightning held together by a very thin layer of crystal. On the third post, the caster uses sheer mindpower to launch the ball forward. It flies at a rate of 80mph. If it makes contact with anything, the cthin crystal explodes, releasing the lightning into the atmosphere. The lightning expands into a quarter-mile diameter explosion, engulfing and destroying any life forms in the area. It cannot destroy any solid items, as the lightning only has the ability to disintegrate flesh. This can be used once per topic.

Name: Chakra Palm
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: -
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Requires charging equal to handseals at this rank. By charging chakra into a single palm, the caster can reflect any jutsu shot at them that is A rank or lower. All they do is hold their palm out after charging, and the jutsu merely bounces off of the hand and back at the caster. The chakra in the palm also re-powers the jutsu, so it is like casting it for a second time back at the target, restarting its speed, distance, and circumference. 10 post cooldown.

S Rank

Name: Big Bang Kamehameha
Rank of Jutsu: S
Element Affinity: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 300 feet
Description: This jutsu requires 3 posts of detailed charging. This jutsu is a hybrid combination of two of the jutsu Bryn T. Orik developed, the Kamehameha and the Big Bang. It is very hard to control, and that is why each post must be detailed to every point to avoid death. In the first post, the caster clasps his hand in front of his body to begin forming the attack. He begins generating an electric field in between the two clasped palms, and very slowly separates them, eventually bringing both hands held out on either side of the body, creating a massive electric field. This part is crucial, for if the caster describes this movement incorrectly in any way, they are electrocuted to death by the immense amount of lightning chakra in the area. On the second post, the caster brings both hands together on the right side of the body, pushing together and condensing the massive electric radius. The caster must be careful in condensing the electricity with crystal at this point. They have to push together both open palms with the electricity and crystal forming together in between, making the hands get close to touching, levitating the field of condensed chakra in the open space between both hands. But if the caster touches the field of chakra in between the palms, or touches either hand together on accident, they crystallize and die instantly. The third post is the trickiest. The caster pushes both palms out forward in front of his body, forcing the condensed chakra out in front of the body. The caster holds his palms open facing forward in front of his body, suspending the chakra in front of them. At this point the user must expand the chakra just enough to match a radius of 15 feet. Any more, and it will succumb the user, crystallizing him then vaporizing him, any less and the jutsu will simply fade away, making the caster expend the chakra for no reason at all. After it has been expanded to the proper length, the caster forces the crystal chakra to the outside of the ball, encasing it and sustaining it so the caster can relax a little bit. On the fourth post, with one final mental push, the huge ball of death is shot forward at an alarming rate of 100mph. It is pushed forward by a huge beam of lightning shot from the palms of the caster that has the same radius. When the ball hits anything at all, it explodes, succumbing a radius of 800 meters to its will. It destroys everything in the radius. The crystal shards slice through everything, and the lightning penetrates the openings made by the crystals, and vaporizes everything in its wake. The explosion spreads at a rate of 120fps. Because of the electromagnetic field that the caster formed around themselves in the first post, they are immune to the damage after the ball explodes. This jutsu can be used once every two weeks.

Ready for approval.

Rock mat is a transfer that I made personally so good to go there.

We already talked about what we are doing with earth tearing palm so that will get taken care of soon but not approved for now.

Earth dragon is another transfer and as far as I can tell is good to go so approved there.

In baseball a 90 mph pitch is something extraordinary and has to be trained specifically for years. What I'm suggesting for here is you lower the speed for standard strength a bit, since it is small and the damage isnt unreasonable you still make it able to be as fast as a standard jonin, using strength boosts to catch those pesky S rank as they try to dodge you.

How about 80 then? I see a lot of pitches in the mid-80s, unless I've gone crazy.

Sorry for posting here. I know I'm not a moderator yet. However, I still believe mid-80's is about a professional-baseball player speed, though I may be wrong considering the power your character already has.

Academy (E Rank)

Name: Earth Style: Underground Voyage
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. The user of this jutsu has gained the ability to be able to move through the earth as if it were water, being able to dig with extreme ease with hands or feet. By focusing chakra into the hands or feet, just as one would focus chakra into feet to stand atop water, the caster focuses chakra into the hands, or the feet, and can cut and slice through earth as if it had the consistency of water. The user can completely travel through the ground as though he were walking on land. This does not apply to other people’s jutsu however due to that earth being fused with foreign chakra. The caster can navigate through 200 meters of earth before having to expel more chakra.

Genin (D Rank)

Name: Earth Style: Mimiwokatamukeru no Jutsu
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. After being activated, the user gains the ability to feel vibrations in the earth, whether it be the ground, walls, or other structures. Using this ability, they can feel all physical attributes of anyone in the affected radius. Simple things from height, weight, and gender to more accurate things like ear size, breathing problems, and eyebrow width can be felt. The radius goes on for 400 meters. The problem is that the user has to be completely still for this jutsu to work. This can last for a time of 5 posting rounds, and has a cooldown of 5 rounds as well.

Name: Earth Release: Rock-Mat Technique
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 150 feet
Description: Hand seals; the user completes their hand seals and stomps the ground with their foot to creates two circular slabs of stone, each a foot and a half across and three inches thick. With a powerful kick or punch the user sends the slabs flying straight in the direction of their choosing at ten miles per hour, after about one hundred and fifty feet the slabs lose speed and fall back to the ground and crumble into dirt. Both slabs must be launched on their own and the maximum height they can be is anywhere from just above the ground to level with the user's chest and shoulders. Whenever these slabs hit something it is like getting hit with a stone disc, at these speeds a direct hit can fracture bones but due to the nature of the technique they then revert back into dirt, this means they can not fully break a bone with the exception of fingers. Four round cool down.



C Rank

Name: Mixed Martial Arts Style: The Crouching Tiger
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: -
Type: Taijutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. This martial artist stance is completely defensive as far as purpose goes, and is useful to those who fight in the way of passiveness. The fighter using this style curls one hand into a fist, turns it upside down, and rests it pointed forward and beside their hip. The other hand is lifted in front of the user’s torso, palm open but fingers curled to look like a tiger’s paw. In this stance, the user can grab any taijutsu attack or kenjutsu attack (granted he grabs the blunt end before the sharp end hits) with the hand lifted forward. Then, the fighter uses the already formed fist, and bats the attack away. If a taijutsu move is grabbed and stopped, then the following punch with the opposite hand can fracture bones. If a kenjutsu move is caught, then the weapon is disarmed from the target. This has a 4 post cooldown.

B Rank

Name: Earth Style: Earth Dragon Jutsu (Doton: Dosekiryū)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 300 ft
Description: After the needed handseals the user will transfer chakra into the ground, turning the earth under into mud. The user will then form the mud into a huge dragon that can be sent for an attack. The dragon is 30 ft long and 5 ft wide, and moves at 50 ft/s, with enough force to dent steel and pierce through iron. The dragon can break bones. If used in an area with mud already the dragon's size increases to 60 ft it's width goes to 10 ft, and the jutsu's strength is increased by 10% able to punh through steel. A C rank Raiton technique can break apart the dragon. If used with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Projectile the dragon's size increases to 100 ft and 20 ft wide, and the jutsu is increased by 20%, it can punch through reinforced steel easily. A B rank Raiton technique or higher can dissipate it if used with earth dragon projectile. The user can only make it 100 ft once per topic. The dragon can change direction up to three times. 4 post cooldown.

Name: Mixed Martial Arts Style: The Jade Dragon
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: -
Type: Taijutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Passive. This is one of the hidden Taijutsu styles passed down through the Stormblood family lineage. It is the offensive counterpart to the Crouching Tiger, focusing mostly on strategic ferocity in the attacks. The user takes a position in which the knees are bent and the feet are shoulder-length apart. He then raises both arms in front of him with open palms and stretched out fingers, resembling dragon's claws. The user waits again for their opponent to attack, but instead of waiting to counter it, they meet it head-on. The user can hit whatever the opponent is using to attack. If the opponent's kick, punch, or any other bodily attack is stopped, the area hit will receive bruising of the muscle and breaking of the bone. They will also be sent backwards into the air. As the opponent flies backward, the user grabs them by the foot before they get too far, pulls them back, and slams them into the ground. This not only creates an opening to a follow-up attack, but the contact with the ground knocks the wind out of the opponent. If a weapon-based attack is deflected, the user will hit any non-sharp part of the weapon, disarm it from the opponent, and it will also send the opponent flying backwards in the same manner. Cooldown of 6 rounds.

Jounin (A Rank)

Name: Kamehameha
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 200 feet
Description: Requires two posts of detailed charging. The first post of charging starts with the caster clasping his hands together in front of him, then pulling them apart while generating lightning chakra. In doing this, the caster creates a magnetic electric field around their body. In the next post, the caster bring his hands to the right side of his body, and begins generating lightningchakra in between both his open palms. Using the magnetic field, the caster overrides the lightning chakra, and forms a dense energy source of a fusion composed of condensed lightning. This part lasts for one post, and if it is held out a post longer, the energy consumes the caster, the lightning spreads to every cell of the body, electrocuting the caster to death. On the third post, the caster thrusts both open palms forward to release the energy. The energy releases in the form of a beam of lightning. The beam has a radius of 12 feet. It flies forward at a rate of 80mph. If it hits anything, the energy cuts clean through any material with a durability of titanium or lower, and the lightning itself vaporizes it. This can be used once per topic.

Name: Big Bang
Rank of Jutsu: A
Element Affinity: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 200 feet
Description: Requires two detailed posts of charging. In the first post, the caster pulls both open palms back and holds them out against each side of their hip, gathering the energy and strength needed to launch the attack. In the second post, the caster thrusts both open palms out and hold them next to eachother facing the target. In doing so, a huge ball with a diameter of 9 feet forms immediately in front of the hands. The ball is made of extremely concentrated lightning held together by an electromagnetic field. On the third post, the caster uses sheer mindpower to launch the ball forward. It flies at a rate of 80mph. If it makes contact with anything, the ball explodes, releasing the lightning into the atmosphere. The lightning expands into a quarter-mile diameter explosion, engulfing and destroying any life forms in the area. It cannot destroy any solid items, as the lightning only has the ability to disintegrate flesh and living organisms. This can be used once per topic.

S Rank

Name: Big Bang Kamehameha
Rank of Jutsu: S
Element Affinity: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 300 feet
Description: This jutsu requires 3 posts of detailed charging. This jutsu is a hybrid combination of two of the jutsu Bryn T. Orik developed, the Kamehameha and the Big Bang. It is very hard to control, and that is why each post must be detailed to every point to avoid death. In the first post, the caster clasps his hand in front of his body to begin forming the attack. He begins generating an electric field in between the two clasped palms, and very slowly separates them, eventually bringing both hands held out on either side of the body, creating a massive electric field. This part is crucial, for if the caster describes this movement incorrectly in any way, they are electrocuted to death by the immense amount of lightning chakra in the area. On the second post, the caster brings both hands together on the right side of the body, pushing together and condensing the massive electric radius. The caster must be careful in condensing the electricity at this point. They have to push together both open palms with the electricity forming in between, making the hands get close to touching, levitating the field of condensed chakra in the open space between both hands. But if the caster touches the field of chakra in between the palms, or touches either hand together on accident, they electrify and die instantly. The third post is the trickiest. The caster pushes both palms out forward in front of his body, forcing the condensed chakra out in front of the body as well. The caster holds his palms open facing forward in front of his body, suspending the chakra in front of them. At this point the user must expand the chakra just enough to match a radius of 15 feet. Any more, and it will succumb the user, burning him electrically then vaporizing him, any less and the jutsu will simply fade away, making the caster expend the chakra for no reason at all. After it has been expanded to the proper length, the caster forces more chakra to the outside of the ball, encasing it and sustaining it so the caster can relax a little bit. On the fourth post, with one final mental push, the huge ball of death is shot forward at an alarming rate of 100mph. It is pushed forward by a huge beam of lightning shot from the palms of the caster that has the same radius. When the ball hits anything at all, it explodes, succumbing a radius of 800 meters to its will. It destroys everything in the radius. The condensed energy slices through everything, and the lightning penetrates the openings made by the slicing, and vaporizes everything in its wake. The explosion spreads at a rate of 120fps. Because of the electromagnetic field that the caster formed around themselves in the first post, they are immune to the damage after the ball explodes. This jutsu can be used once every two weeks.

Just drop the distance on that first D rank like we discussed and I can approve this list

I fixed that D-rank, so all should be approvable.

Here's my next one:

Lariat

Rank of Jutsu: B

Element Affinity: -

Type: Taijutsu

Distance: Self

Description: Passive. The Lariat is a quick, but powerful Taijutsu attack. It's most basic form does not require a charging of chakra, and is considered passive. When activated, the user runs forward with their arm held out to their side at a speed two ranks higher than that of their natural speed, and they perform a "clothesline" on their target. Upon doing so, the user must yell out, "Lariat!" If it misses, the jutsu is nullified completely, and can only be performed again after the cooldown. The damage from this jutsu depends on the strength of the user, being an attack pulling power purely from the upper body muscles. At base strength (on anyone), this attack (usually aimed at the chest) causes severe bruising to both skin and bone. If a successful attack hits the chest, it can make breathing very painful and slightly difficult. If hit, the target is sent soaring through the air at 30fps for 30 feet, and it is impossible to not lose your footing. For each 20% boost in strength, 15 feet is added to the distance, but nothing is added to the damage due to the force being spread over the entire torso. Cooldown of 7 posts.

Heavy Lariat

Rank of Jutsu: A

Element Affinity: -

Type: Taijutsu

Distance: Self

Description: Passive. The Lariat is a quick, but powerful Taijutsu attack. It's most basic form does not require a charging of chakra, and is considered passive. When activated, the user runs forward with their arm held out to their side at a speed three ranks higher than that of their natural speed, and they perform a "clothesline" on their target. Upon doing so, the user must yell out, "Lariat!" If it misses, the jutsu is nullified completely, and can only be performed again after the cooldown. The damage from this jutsu depends on the strength of the user, being an attack pulling power purely from the upper body muscles. This is a special version of the original Lariat, however, and pulls its power form chakra as well. Utilizing some version of chakra enhancement (Lightning Release Armor, Tailed Forms of Jinchuuriki, etc..), the caster boosts the damage of this attack exponentially. At base strength, and while being in a chakra enhanced state (this is a necessity), this attack (sill normally aimed at the chest) fractures bones and breaks through skin, causing more than severe damage. This has the potential to cause the lung cavities to collapse, killing the target, but if it hits anywhere other than that, is makes the target paralyzed with shock of mere pain for one post afterward if they are the same rank as the caster. If it is anyone less in rank, then it makes them pass out. The chakra enhancement of the arm also gives it the ability to withstand any material of titanium grade of lower, and can break steel. After impact, the target is sent flying through the air at 60fps for 60 feet, and it is impossible to not lose your footing. For each 20% boost in strength, 10 feet are added to the distance, but nothing is added to the damage. Cooldown of 10 posts.

(When asking to buy this, the buyer must provide which state of chakra enhancement they will be using this in. If it does not qualify in the eyes of the moderator, then the purchase can be cancelled.)

Can I get a mod to price these?

"LARIAT!"- passive 15,000

Heavy "LARIAT!"- passive 25,000

Buying them both. Deduct my Ryo please.

I dun took yo cash