Ventus Uchiha - Technique Registration

Kamui Path:

4D 2C 1B

Name: Fuuton: Suffocating Grasp
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Touch
Description: Requires a one post charge. The user of this technique is able to knock out people more easily than normal, by using the power of wind chakra after grabbing their target's throat or mouth they are able to suck all of the oxygen out of their lungs which renders them unable to breathe or make vocal sounds. This effect causes the victim to pass out after one post. They will remain unconscious for 3 rounds but due to the stealthy nature of this technique it is not suited for combat use but rather capture missions and other situations that would require quick and silent work. 4 post cool down.

Name: Fuuton: Slicing Sparrow
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: close to medium range
Description: After hand seals have been completed the user places his palms together and slowly pulls them apart to condense raw wind chakra into the form of a sparrow, this bird is the size of an average sparrow bird. The bird moves between 30-40 mph. After it's creation the bird acts freely and can fly as a normal bird of this kind with only one addition. The bird, when it flies into something, can create a series of incisions that cut to a medium degree that cause a noticeable amount of blood loss that will stop after 3 rounds. To end the bleeding early the victim will require the use of a D rank Ijutsu. The bird lasts either 3 turns or until it rams into something.

Name: Air Scooter
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: self targeted
Description: Charge time equal to hand seals; the user charges this technique like a rasengan, building up a sphere of (fuuton) chakra in their palm but rather than using this sphere for an offensive attack they release it beneath them to have it grow larger an allow them to sit cross-legged while hovering above the ground. In addition to separating the user from the ground this sphere allows for faster movement, increasing their base speed by 10 mph for the duration of its activation. The sphere is three feet across and thus puts the user three feet off the ground while active, this would allow them to ignore things that directly affect the ground like small tremors but as this allows them to hover and not fly the technique would be ended early should they come to a point where there was no surface directly beneath the sphere itself. If the sphere itself is hit by at least D rank katon jutsu it will dissipate and end the technique early. The sphere is able to go in the vertical direction up a wall. 3 post duration, 5 post cool down.

Name: Sugar Coated Demise
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: -
Type: Genjutsu
Distance: One selected target within 50 feet of the caster
Description: The user must charge chakra for a round before using this technique, in addition the user must be eating a pocky and then snap it either by hand or with their mouth which when combined with the chakra charged creates a crunching sound and activates the technique. The technique causes the victim to start seeing changes made to themselves, at first their skin changes to the color of a biscuit stick in addition to their arms and legs being locked together at their sides. After that their body is covered in chocolate from their head to their knees and everything starts getting stiff as they seem to shrink. They then shrink down as a demonic version of the caster picks them up and takes a bite out of them which is the end of the technique. These mental visions last one round, during which time the victim loses all of their senses in the real world and instead feel the things happening in the vision but are still able to move around. 3 post cool down.

Name: Fuuton: Great Breakthrough
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: 60 feet out, 15 feet across
Description: Hand seals; the user builds up a large amount of powerful wind chakra in their mouth and then releases it as a powerful tornado level wind blast (90 mph winds). This blast is capable of bending average adult trees enough so that half their roots are exposed in addition to flinging all things not bolted down (up to 500 pounds) backwards with enough force to break human bones. 6 round cool down.

Name: Fuuton: Deadly Needles
Rank of Jutsu: C
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Refer to description
Description: Requires charging to build up chakra, the user of this technique is a master at using senbon and has taken his or her use of them to the next level by combing them with their elemental chakra. When this technique is use up to ten senbon on the user's person are coated in wind chakra which allows them to be throw at the normal speed of a senbon but the chakra allows it to have it's range extended up to a total of 100 feet. In addition this coating allows the senbon to easily puncture up to two inches of steel or their entire length through an iron surface. The coating lasts until the weapon is thrown or the topic ends. 5 round cool down after activation.

Name: Tornado Fist
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Refer to description
Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra into their arms by rotating them in a circle for as long as they would normally charge a B rank jutsu. After charging the user's fist has a rapidly spinning funnel of wind that extends from down near the user's elbow to right around their knuckles are. This mini tornado is the offensive part of the technique, if it comes into contact with someone's exposed skin it has the level of power to cause lacerations one to two inches deep depending on how close the target gets. The main ability of this technique is pushing the opponent back from you, this is accomplished by doing a normal punch or just almost landing a strike. When the user desires they can choose to release the tornado, the effect being that whatever was in front of that tornado in a 100 degree angle (within 50 feet) is blown backwards fifty feet along with receiving one and a half inch deep cuts all over their body. Things bolted to the ground or that have deep roots (like trees and bushes) are not moved and things over 300 pounds are unaffected by the push back but still receive the lacerations unless they are tougher than iron. This technique has a variation called the double tornado fist, as the name suggests it creates two cyclones (one on each wrist), this can only be done if both arms are charged up at the start, doing this costs and additional 20 chakra. The cyclone(s) can last up to three posts before fading away or being stopped early by being released. 7 post cool down.

Tornado Fist:

Double Tornado Fist:

That should just about do it for starting techs

I approve the Suffocating Grasp and I know I've approved Tornado fist in the past. I'll do more work with these when I have more time available.

Onto the Slicing Sparrow:

Deep cuts at 40mph for a D-rank is too high of a damage ratio. Reduce to medium cuts or reduce speed to 15mph. Also state that the bleeding can be stopped either by a D-rank Ijutsu or waiting for 3 turns.

Done

Fuuton: Great Breakthrough

How fast does the wind move? It can't be entirely too fast if it's 15 feet across and breaks bones caught in it.

done

The Senbon C rank:

70 mph and puncturing steel for a whole topic is too stacked for a C rank. Lower the speed to being a normal senbon speed or lower the puncurability, or give a time limit. Sound good?

speed lowered

Then you, my friend, are good to go.

Name: Tornado Exloding Fist
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: Fuuton / Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Touch
Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra into their arm by rotating them in a circle for as long as they would normally charge a B rank jutsu. After charging the user's fist has a rapidly spinning funnel of wind that extends from down near the user's elbow to right around their knuckles are, within the area of this funnel of wind is a bright blue and yellow and makes a loud electrical crackling sound. This mini tornado is the offensive part of the technique, if it comes into contact with someone's exposed skin it has the level of power to cause lacerations one to two inches deep depending on how close the target gets, due to the heat of the electricity these cuts are cauterized instantly. The main ability of this technique is attacking the opponent with a powerful explosion emitted from the wind funnel, this is accomplished by doing a normal punch or just almost landing a strike. When the user gets within six inches of their intended target they can choose to release the tornado, the effect being that whatever was in front of that tornado in a 100 degree angle (and within twenty feet) is caught in an explosion that causes third degree electrical burns and cauterized one inch deep cuts. The cyclone can last up to 2 posts before fading away or being stopped early by it being released. 7 post cool down.

Spoiler:

Lower the duration to 2 posts, and you're approved.

done

Priced at 9000!

Name: Tenjin (Heaven Blade)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Touch
Description: Charge equal to hand seals. To charge this technique the user grabs their wrist and thrusts large amount of chakra into the palm and fingers, effectively coating them in the raiton element that sometimes creates small sparks by the time it is complete. In addition to the thin coating of raiton chakra this technique produces a 'blade' of chakra from the inner wrist that extends out six inches further than the user's fully extended middle finger in length. When the charging phase is complete the user is free to use this 'blade' of chakra on their hand like a weapon of varying sharpness levels. The technique lasts for three posts total, starting with the ability to cut through titanium cleanly and then losing bits of this power as time goes on. Only being able to cut steel by the second post and iron by the third before it fades away. The jutsu, however, is unable to kill a person after the first round it is active and even then they would have to stab into a heavily vital area like the heart or brain otherwise it only causes injury. In addition to this all cuts made by the technique are instantly cauterized on flesh. 8 round cool down, twice per topic

Side View:

9000 Ryo

Name: False Chakra Field
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Distance: Self-targeted
Description: Passive. The user is able to create an aura of chakra around them which has a chosen elemental "theme" which is decided upon the start of the use. This theme is simple enough, the fire theme is fire burning off the user's skin, water is a flowing splash around the user, earth has stones flying around them, wind picks up leaves or other things from the area and has it fly around the user and lightning is shown by sparks flying off of them in a large field. Though these auras seem real they are a simple illusion used for intimidation purposes as well as to fool someone into thinking that the user specializes in an elements they might not have.

Name: Walking Dead
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Distance: Self-targeted
Description: Passive. The user's body takes on a very dead appearance with rotting skin and feverish wounds that are possibly still bleeding and/or spilling entrails. Exact descriptions are different from user to user but in the end they look like zombies.

Name: False Weapon
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Distance: Self-targeted
Description: Passive. The user does a quick set of fake hand seals and draws blood so that they appear to summon a weapon from the normal summoning technique. However what actually happens is the formation of a weapon from an illusion. This weapon appears very real but has no substance and therefore is unable to cut anyone or anything.

I don't see any issues with these, pretty simple party tricks really.

Approved
500 ryo each

Name: Dutch Oven Technique
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Distance: Refer to description
Description: Passive. A playful trick used among friends, the dutch oven technique is an odd jutsu that has become rather infamous around the academy schoolyard. By focus chakra into the caster's intestinal track for just a moment they are able to release a chakra infused fart that makes all those who hear it believe that the smell is on par with being surrounded on all sides by rotten garbage. In turn, the user can also use this technique to make the fart smell sweet or pleasant, anything from roses to lavender can be chosen. The false smell lasts two posts against those who fall victim to it.

Name: Prismatic Chaos
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Distance: Refer to description
Description: Passive. The people affected by this technique are those who look at the caster (even for just a moment) while the illusion is active. By snapping their fingers the technique is activated and from that point by snapping again or even just pointing at something the caster is able to make those who are under his illusion think that something is a different color, this change in color is able to occur more than once and when used for fun is often done quite quickly. 3 post duration.

Name: Percussion
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Distance: affects all in the area
Description: Passive. To activate this technique the caster needs to do a count off like an orchestral conductor, after this has been done for the first measure or two of the technique the caster no longer needs to do this. This technique creates the illusion of music in the area, specifically that of pounding drums, crashing cymbals and ringing bells. The technique lasts for anywhere from 3 to 6 rounds depending on the song though other than adding to the atmosphere it has no effect on things like battle.

Name: Easy Math
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Vision
Description: Passive. By using the perceptive powers of the sharingan in a specific way the caster of this technique is able to quickly and accurately determine the amounts of things. This can be used in all sorts of ways such as looking at a pile of gold and being able to tell exactly how many coins make it up.

Name: Eagle Vision
Rank of Jutsu: E
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Vision
Description: One round charge up. The caster of this technique is able to see things in a much different way than other people by taking full advantage of the Sharingan's ability to see chakra. When the technique is active the caster is able to make a permanent mark (a colored aura) on people that identify them as different things. Marking someone as red denotes them as an enemy, blue is an ally and white represents people that you are undecided about. Those that have never been marked with eagle vision appear to have a rather clear aura about them while the technique is active. Eagle Vision can last a maximum of 5 rounds with a cool down equal to how long you kept it active.

2500 for the lot of them my good man

Ill just buy all my registered E ranks now, ryo deducted

Gonna buy Tenjin as well since Im on a spending spree. Ryo deducted

Name: Falcon Drop
Rank of Jutsu: B
Element Affinity: n/a
Type: Taijutsu
Distance: Touch
Description: Passive. The user of this technique needs to first grab their target out of the air with their arms and legs, after that everything is in place. Using chakra this technique accelerates the user and their target towards the ground, the downside is that the chakra also softens the impact with the ground slightly making it so that this technique can not kill someone by itself. The force of impact will however make fractures on the target's spine (10% speed decrease until Ijutsu is applied) in addition to paralyzing them for a round from shock. 8 round cool down.

If you're fracturing the spine, paralysis will last much longer than a round, and I'm afraid spine fracturing isn't exactly C rank. Could you make it B please? Edit and bump

The paralysis is actually from the shock of being slammed not the injury itself but I can still up this to B rank. If I do though then maybe we should add in like a 10% speed decrease or something.

edit: put these changes into effect to see how they look