Dovahkiin, Finnik [Technique Registration]

Name: Fuuami (Air Walking)
Rank of Jutsu: D
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Distance: Self
Description: Last 3 posts, 3 post cooldown. Through the use of this technique, the user is able to flow Fuuton chakra throughout their body in a way it makes them almost weightless. As long as the user keeps moving, they can walk over any substance imaginable, running across very small and thin tree limbs, not crushing anything on the ground, jumping on falling leaves, and even 'glide' about seven feet.

Well first of all, I'm gonna have to talk it over with the boss.

Second, be more clear on what it does. Are you merely walking on the ground just lightly enough that you don't crunch anything or are you literally walking on air?

It makes me very, very light, almost weightless, making me walk on objects you could never walk on, such as the things listed in the description.

You didn't answer my actual question.

.. Bump

How far is a "great distacnce?"

Bump.

What the max duration that it can be used?

Bump

Seems legit. 2500 ryo.

I'll take it.

this is still a bit to vague, Ill mod this myself later

First, weight control has been associated to an element in the canon. Believe it or not this element is earth not wind so its kind of strange already. While this wont just outright destroy the technique as a fuuton jutsu any weight control asects, as they might not even be needed, might be removed before we finish.

Second, duration and cool down generally go at the start. The start of a description normally says hand seals or charge time which is something you are currently lacking anyway.

Third, you never really answered if you are really walking on the air as a form of flying or just hovering a bit above the ground. Only thing I can see is that you can glide 7 feet, does that means you can walk 7 feet above the ground or you can step off the ground a little into the air and move 7 feet before touching down on the ground again?