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Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed Apr 24, 2013 9:30 am | |
| Free Jutsu: Name: Zeus' Lightning Bolt Rank of Jutsu: B Element Affinity: Lightning Type: Ninjutsu Distance: Long Description: After the necessary handseals, the user generates lightning in his hands, and molds it into a shape of a lightning bolt 3 inches diameter. After locking on to his target, he throws the lightning. It travels at the speed of 50 mph. At impact, it would cause a bit of knockback, cause numbness for 3 post and 2nd degree burn. It would also pierce 1 cm into the skin, burning the wound at contact. Knockback can throw a person one meter back - Ignore:
] Name: Memory Lurker Rank of Jutsu: D Element Affinity: / Type: Genjutsu Distance: / Description: This genjutsu allows the user to view the target’s memory. As he lurks in the target’s memory, both him and the target can view this memory. The caster can also alter the memory, although not in a big scale. Lasts for 3 posts. 3 post cooldown Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique) Rank of Jutsu: D Element Affinity: N/A Type: Genjutsu Distance: Short Description: Handseals. This illusion best works in surprise attacks. The target will first see something swirling around them common to the area, leaves, loose snow, sand. On their next post, they will begin to see and hear something that they would never want to see, the death of a loved one, old people making love, it ranges. It shows them their worst fears. Can be broken by kai. Pain in the genjutsu does not break it (given their worst fear is something like fire) Chuunin (C Rank) Katon: Hosenka no Jutsu Rank of Jutsu: C Element Affinity: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Distance: 0-30 ft Description: The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls about as big as soft balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. There can be a maximum of 10 fireballs, and each one causes second-degree burns. Cool down four posts. Katon: Great Fireball Technique Rank of Jutsu: C Element Affinity: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Distance: 50 feet Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. At its largest, Goukyaku no Jutsu is 10 feet in diameter, and can travel at 40 mph. Requires hand seals. This technique can leave severe third degree burns at its center (a five foot radius from the exact center) while the rest of the fireball gives off second degree burns. 6 post cool down. Special Jounin (B Rank) Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique) Rank of Jutsu: B Element Affinity: N/A Type: Ninjutsu Distance: Clone Technique Description: Requires a charge equal to hand seals followed by a single tiger seal to unleash the technique. Unlike the normal Bunshin technique which creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance, the Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with solid form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. The user can only create a maximum of 6 shadow clones, and must distribute their chakra between them. That means if they have 130 chakra, and summon 4 clones, that means the technique will subtract 30 and have 100 chakra left to distribute between the clones. This means that each clone will have 20 chakra, including the user. If a clone is destroyed the chakra returns to the user. 6 round cool down after use. Cloud-Style Flame Beheading Rank of Jutsu: B Element Affinity: Katon Type: Kenjutsu Distance: 25 Feet Description: The user first imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique, such as Atsui, is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously. {on contact 3rd degree burns and temporary numbness in that are for 2 posts}.
- Kenkakku Style:
Kenkakku 1st style : Counter Stance Rank of Jutsu: D Element Affinity: / Type: Kenjutsu Distance: Self Description: Requires charging chakra on the tip of the blade for one post. The user first lifts his blade over his head, and spins it around in circles, with the tip of the blade imbued with chakra. The user stands on the balls of their feet and moves gracefully, following the point of the blade and using its weight and momentum to increase their evasion speed. Grants an increase in speed of 20%, though only while evading attacks. After evading the attack, the user can end the jutsu by attacking the target, just a normal attack. Last 3 post, 6 post cooldown Kenkakku Style 2nd Form: Everything is not what it seems Rank of Jutsu: D Element Affinity: / Type: Genjutsu Distance: Mid Description: Requires charging chakra at the eye. After gaining eye contact, the target is under the genjutsu. The user would then leave an illusionary clone, at where he was standing, while he would be invisible from the target's view. The user can control the "illusion clone", while he can stealthily move. Destroying the clone would end the genjutsu immediately. If the user moves away from the target, the clone would last for 3 post, while the user is stealthed. If the user moves towards the target, and enters a radius 20 feet from the target, the genjutsu last only 1 second. Cooldown of 5 post. Can be broken with kai or pain. Kenkakku Style 3rd form:Lag Rank of Jutsu: B Element Affinity: / Type: Genjutsu Distance: Eyesight Description: Description: Requires charging chakra at the eye. After gaining eye contact, the target is under the user's genjutsu. This Genjutsu causes the opponent's senses to "lag" by 3 seconds. The opponent's sight, hearing, sense of feeling, and etc are all affected. This last for 2 post, with a cooldown of 9 post. Can be broken with kai or pain. This last for 3 post, with a cooldown of 6 post. Can be broken with kai or pain.
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| | | Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed Apr 24, 2013 10:20 am | |
| On the D, I'm going to need you to add that handseals are needed. Also, give me a duration as to how long the clones stay active and increase the cooldown to 5. If the duration of the clones goes anywhere above 4, add onto the cooldown 2 for each post that it lasts longer. (For example if you made it last 6 posts the cooldown would be 9)
The C is in our canon list so it is automatically approved.
Speed of sound is a bit much. Make the radius of the bolt 2 inches, but since the damage is so low, it can move at.. say.. 50mph. It also needs a cooldown. | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu Apr 25, 2013 5:52 am | |
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| | | Neo Sabakukage
Character Age : 28 Posts : 308 Ryo : 20000
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Sat Apr 27, 2013 9:15 am | |
| Hydra Clone: - Code:
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State what can release the target from the genjutsu. Zeus' Lightning Bolt: - Code:
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How far can this knockback actually knock a target back? | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:43 am | |
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| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Tue Apr 30, 2013 5:27 am | |
| Bump, and you can also start checking the Kenkakku style jutsu | |
| | | Shogun Genin
Character Age : 34 Posts : 131 Ryo : 5300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:30 am | |
| Toss a cooldown on that B rank and you'll be ready to go! (Probably about 5 or 6 posts) | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed May 01, 2013 9:19 am | |
| I added 5 post cooldown to it. Now, I have 3 new jutsu, which I want to buy. I'll keep my B rank | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed May 01, 2013 9:19 am | |
| I added 5 post cooldown to it. Now, I have 3 new jutsu, all three under the same style, and some other minor jutsu, which I want to buy. | |
| | | Shogun Genin
Character Age : 34 Posts : 131 Ryo : 5300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed May 01, 2013 9:53 am | |
| Separate in another post what all you want to buy apart from the free ones. | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed May 01, 2013 10:28 am | |
| To buy(Kenkakku Stance) : Kenkakku 1st style : Counter Stance Rank of Jutsu: D Element Affinity: / Type: Kenjutsu Distance: Self Description: Requires charging chakra on the tip of the blade for one post. The user first lifts his blade over his head, and spins it around in circles, with the tip of the blade imbued with chakra. The user stands on the balls of their feet and moves gracefully, following the point of the blade and using its weight and momentum to increase their evasion speed. Grants an increase in speed of 20%, though only while evading attacks. After evading the attack, the user can end the jutsu by attacking the target, just a normal attack. Last 3 post, 6 post cooldown Kenkakku Style 2nd Form: Everything is not what it seems Rank of Jutsu: D Element Affinity: / Type: Genjutsu Distance: Mid Description: Requires charging chakra at the eye. After gaining eye contact, the target is under the genjutsu. The user would then leave an illusionary clone, at where he was standing, while he would be invisible from the target's view. The user can control the "illusion clone", while he can stealthily move. Destroying the clone would end the genjutsu immediately. If the user moves away from the target, the clone would last for 3 post, while the user is stealthed. If the user moves towards the target, and enters a radius 20 feet from the target, the genjutsu last only 1 second. Cooldown of 5 post. Can be broken with kai or pain. Kenkakku Style 3rd form:Lag Rank of Jutsu: B Element Affinity: / Type: Genjutsu Distance: Eyesight Description: Description: Requires charging chakra at the eye. After gaining eye contact, the target is under the user's genjutsu. This Genjutsu causes the opponent's senses to "lag" by 3 seconds. The opponent's sight, hearing, sense of feeling, and etc are all affected. This last for 2 post, with a cooldown of 9 post. Can be broken with kai or pain. To buy: Velocitatem Rank of Jutsu: E Element Affinity: / Type: Ninjutsu Distance: Short Description: After charging chakra in the stomach for one post, the user can release the most stinkiest fart ever. Cooldown 4 post. Candy Lover Rank of Jutsu: D Element Affinity: / Type: Ninjutsu Distance: Contact Description: The ninjutsu is cast by touching/holding an object. The user then channels his chakra into the object for one post, and then turning it to candy for 3 post. During this 3 post, if the user eats the object, the object will remain in candy form, and will just be digested like a normal candy. If the user doesn't eat it, it will just turn back to its original form after the 3 post. The user can change it to any candy, and any flavor. Can turn anything to candy, as long as he can hold it, and once eaten, the object will not transform any longer.
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| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed May 01, 2013 10:28 am | |
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| | | Sora Chūnin
Character Age : 16 Posts : 125 Ryo : 9204
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu May 02, 2013 11:04 am | |
| General things: Every technique requires handseals or charging, which you can write like this "Requires handseals" or "Requires charging equal to handseals", there are rules that dictate charge times for this accordingly and can be found in the RUles forum under 'Comprehensive battle rules'.
Counter Stance - Ok lets break this down, stances are meant to work like this. 'Enter the stance. Gain a passive benefit for a duration or some sort of special move from it, or both.' At the moment it sounds like your stance increases your evasion speed by using the weight of the sword and its momentum to move through the air quicker. Just describe it simply like...
'The user stands on the balls of their feet and moves gracefully, following the point of the blade and using its weight and momentum to increase their evasion speed. Grants an increase in speed of 20%, though only while evading attacks'.
As for the final attack from the sounds of the name of the jutsu it should be a special strike you use if you succesfulyl evade an attack, either way you need to describe the damage of the strike, which should be pretty much just a normal cut.
2nd stance - Still requires charging, the sword movements are the trigger for the genjutsu and need to be described better, can the clone be destroyed, what can you do while in this tech? because being able to inst sneak attack without warning is too strong for a D rank, what can the clone do?
3rd stance - needs charging or handseals, the movements are the trigger for the jutsu and need to be described better. 3 seconds for C rank is probably a bit much, try lowering it to 1, which is still a reasonable amount if you really think about it.
Fart jutsu - Priced at 500 ryo
Candy Lover - What can be turned into candy, does it change back after you eat it?
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| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Fri May 03, 2013 7:21 am | |
| Done changes. Increased lag's rank. | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Sat May 04, 2013 9:25 am | |
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| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Mon May 06, 2013 4:04 am | |
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| | | Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Tue May 07, 2013 10:28 am | |
| "(But how would the target know he's under a genjutsu?)"
Get rid of this from all genjutsu.
The answer is the Sharingan, or Sensory, or the Byakugan. Or if the genjutsu is so obviously not reality. Like if the world explodes and unicorns fly across the sky spewing fire from their teeth as an example of an obvious breech in reality. | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed May 08, 2013 9:16 am | |
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| | | Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Wed May 08, 2013 1:58 pm | |
| You did not get rid of that phrase where it is located. Please remove it wherever it is still stated. | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu May 09, 2013 5:27 am | |
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| | | Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu May 09, 2013 9:19 am | |
| The spoiler in the first post. | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu May 09, 2013 9:31 am | |
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| | | Shogun Genin
Character Age : 34 Posts : 131 Ryo : 5300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu May 09, 2013 9:44 am | |
| Counter Stance- Requires charging chakra on the tip of the blade for one post. The user first lifts his blade over his head, and spins it around in circles, with the tip of the blade imbued with chakra. The user stands on the balls of their feet and moves gracefully, following the point of the blade and using its weight and momentum to increase their evasion speed. Grants an increase in speed of 20%, though only while evading attacks. After evading the attack, the user can end the jutsu by attacking the target, just a normal attack.
How many posts does this last? Or is it just for one evasion?
Now for the genjutsu, they have nothing to do with kenjutsu, so you're going to have to get rid of that, they are only genjutsu.
Everything is Not What it Seems: Requires charging chakra at the eye, if to be done through eye contact, or charging chakra at the sword if to be done using sword movements. This functions the same way as how hypnosis using a pendulum works. After performing sword movements/gaining eye contact, the target is under the genjutsu. The user would then leave an illusionary clone, at where he was standing, while he would be invisible from the target's view. The user can control the "illusion clone", while he can stealthily move anywhere he likes. Destroying the clone would end the genjutsu immediately. The user cannot come anywhere 2 feet near the enemy. Doing this would immediately cancel the Genjutsu. This last for 3 post, with a cooldown of 5 post. Can be broken with kai or pain.
Way too stacked for a D rank. It makes you completely invisible for 3 posts? That can be set up as an auto-kill, an undodgable auto-kill, so I can't let it happen. Even with the two feet thing, two feet is an extremely short distance, and you could launch an attack at them so that as soon as the two feet is breeched, the genjutsu ends, yeah, but it's also too late for the enemy to realize what's happening. So here's what you're going to do. Get rid of the whole "sword movements" thing, it frankly doesn't make sense to me to make this anything but simple eye contact. Now, for a D rank, there's only one way to make this fair. Say that the invisibility of you only lasts for 1 second, and then you are visible and the clone disappears. Change the cooldown to 3 posts.
Lag: Requires charging chakra at the eye, if to be done through eye contact, or charging chakra at the sword if to be done using sword movements. This functions the same way as how hypnosis using a pendulum works. After performing sword movements/gaining eye contact, the target is under the user's genjutsu. This Genjutsu causes the opponent's senses to "lag" by 3 seconds. The opponent's sight, hearing, sense of feeling, and etc are all affected. This last for 3 post, with a cooldown of 6 post. Can be broken with kai or pain.
Same thing, just make it eye contact, especially for as extreme a genjutsu. Increase the cooldown to 9 posts, make the duration 2 posts. | |
| | | Hades Genin
Character Age : 14 Posts : 43 Ryo : 2300
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu May 09, 2013 10:08 am | |
| Counter Stance - 3 post, 6 post cooldown.
Genjutsu- They use sword movements to look cool xD, though, you can do it just by using eye contact.
Everything is not what it seems - What if I make it B rank, can I keep it the way it is? Or I don't mind reducing the amount of post it last. I want to make it this way so the clone can act as a decoy, so the user can escape, or to use it offensively.
Lag- Done what you asked me too, though I kept sword movements, making eye contact an option, too. | |
| | | Aeran Uchiha Genin
Character Age : 15 Posts : 324 Ryo : 13699
| Subject: Re: Hades' Jutsu Registration Thu May 09, 2013 10:30 am | |
| Priced at 4,000 Ryo for both D ranks and 9583 for the B. | |
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